Kony 2012
What do you think about children in Uganda sleeping in fear of being kidnapped? Does anyone deserve that? Many people are donating money and giving their voice to the program Invisible Children. Even though Joseph kony is gone from Uganda, he still has all those captives . Those captives are children! They are forced to kill their parents and serve Joseph Kony with guns. Kony must be stopped.
Joseph kony is a man who is the jesus of his own religon. He is a guy who kidnaps kids kids and force them to use a gun and shoot their parents. He cuts off their limbs and lips. Whil we are here, kids are are being tortured an forced to kill others. Many parents are grieving for their children. Is that what you want?
It is just common sense to help their problem, their children, and all those grieving parents. Even though Joseph Kony isn't in Uganda anymore, the parents still miss their children! Ugandan authorities are trying to get id of them but they are failing! So we should help the authorities.
There are many problems in Africa right now but all those problems are for natural causes like diseases. What I'm trying to say is that the problem is caused by a human being, which means, it should be easier to solve this problem!
I strongly agree that naking Kony famous will let everyone know how bad he is will start helping and giving their voice to the captives of Joseph kony.
It a good argumentative essay about Kony. You paragraphed each points well and gave some details to each of them. However, make sure you spellcheck before you publish because I see some mistakes that could have been avoided. :)
답글삭제I agree with Wonwoo. Very good writing! But I know you know what is wrong if you READ and TYPE carefully. I won't bother printing this out and fixing the silly mistakes. You have enough English fluency to know that "are are" and "Whil" are not right.
답글삭제As well, this post needs visual appeal. Right now there is nothing to catch my eye to tell me what Kony looks like. Videos, links, and pictures are essential. Put some in.
I hope to see your awesome writing come to life next time I visit!
Did you know that there are some negative sides about KONY 2012? I will give you a brief introduce about those negative sides. First of all, that leader of Invisible Children, Jason Russel is a physco. Once, he ran through his neighborhood naked. The majority thinks that he is crazy about his reliion. And so on, you really can't say Invisible Children is good when the leader has a mental problem. Also, despite the fact that he claims himself as a pathest, there was a picture of hm holding a gun. Definitley, not a look of a person who supports peace and no violence. Not only that, but Invisible Children only send 30% to Africa out of their whole profit.
답글삭제Second of all, Joseph Kony hasn't been around for 5 years! Who knows? He might have died or his army LRA could have rebelled. So Invisible Children can be making up things just to earn money. And the time when Russel went over to Uganda was ten years ago. A lot of things could have changed throught that long period of time.
It's not like I am saying that KONY 2012 is wong. What I want to say is that there can be some other possibilites. You are an amaing blogger!
Sincerely, Cheese