Dear BoBo,
I'm sorry for cutting open your back every time I need a pencil or Pen. I actually really don't have a choice. But I promise you that I'll try to do it less. Do you like coming with me all around the place? I'm sure you do. I promise you I'll bring you around more often.
The first time I met you was at an airport. My mom bought you for me as a gift. It must have hurt a lot when the company dug out your body. Well the first time I met you, I liked you right away. So please understand my feelings too.
There's one request I would like to give you. Could you not get yourself dirty that much? You are a lot dirtier than when I first met you. Other than that, thanks for helping me.
Also, I forgot to add, could you keep your insides clean too? I think the led is making it dirty. I'll be more careful and so will you. Ok? Could you also smile? All the time your face expression is serious. Also, your nose and eyes are the same size and close to each other. So could you try to spread it apart? Thank you!
You are a good writer - so challenge yourself to use alliteration and repetition to be more poetic. As well, I need a visual cue to tell me what it is your writing about.
답글삭제All in all - good!